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*Orangiii*

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:U i drew her
hurray XD
im testing shading also?
do you like?
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
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First off, let me say that this does look kinda adorable.
The color choices for the markings aren't bad either, but there's quite a few things to mention.
Eyes don't work that way. It wouldn't show through the hair. And no, that is also NOT a style question. It just doesn't work that way and it doesn't exactly look good either. You can let the outlines for the eye show through, but that is the most I'd say is okay.
The eyes are a little too far from each other, or at least it looks like that.
And I don't think hair works that way either, if it's fluff coming from the top of the head, which is should be, the from our view right ear should not be behind the hair. Ears also have insides which you left out. I don't know if it's a species question, but assuming it is not, you simply left them out and it just looks like something is missing.
Legs don't exactly work that way either, to me, they look kinda broken, facing completely sideways like this. They should've faced forward a little more. And why did you draw toes on the hindfeet, but not on the forepaws? It looks kinda strange to be honest.
You could've put some more work into making the markings look a little neater, and not just kind of lazily painted on. Since I think I'm seeing a little of the hairs color bleed into the face, and that just doesn't look good. Try to work a little tidier next time. the tail and the bow look fine to me though.
The background also seems a little lazily and sloppily made, a little more work with it would surely make it look better.
In the last words I gotta say that I like the coloring of the eyes. It looks nice.